Sunday, January 31, 2010

some poems i wrote

damn, decided to post poems here. seems like the most productive thing to do.

1

i intended to write a poem


i spelt intended wrong then fixed it


i have not left my house for three days


is this even how you write poetry


i am confused re. everything


if i read poems by other people i feel like i am going to ''subconsciously'/'conciously' copy them'


i don't read many poems


[via fears of plagiarism]


'jesus'


2

i lay down and looked at the ceiling


then i stopped b/c it seemed cliche


i tried to do everything with a 'sense of irony'


i tried to read with a sense of irony


i tried to eat with a sense of irony


i tried to write poetry with a sense of irony


i tried to do everything with a sense of irony with a sense of irony


am i too self aware


i asked myself with a sense of irony


3

questioning my existence,


via 'extremely basic existentialism'


seems bleak


am i 'just' a 'carbon copy' of tao lin/


brandon scott gorrell/zachary german/noah cicero/


jordan castro/ellen kennedy/victoria trott/


miles ross/megan boyle/abigail lloyd/


r.b glaser/michael earl craig/joseph moore/


rebecca curtis/deb olin unferth/mazie louise montgomery/


matthew rohrer/richard wehrenberg jr/chris killen/


a lot of other people


seems likely



damn. let me know what u think i guess.

i changed the blog layout 'a fuckton' this afternoon too, seems better now.

4 comments:

Zachary German said...

seems like you are probably a carbon copy of tara wray

i like your music blog

Ben Rosamond said...

seems like i fucked up re. tara wray placement, i changed it to richard wehrenberg jr.

sweet.

clarified confusion said...

you write well
i think we all have a 'unique' voice
somewhere
most of the time
you seem smart too
keep it 'up' bro
or do you prefer keep it up 'bro'
either way

Tao Lin said...

sweet

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